7 Strategy: Finding the Supporting Points
Sometimes, an organization statement will be used in conjunction with a thesis. An organizational statement is a map that tells readers what they should expect to read in an essay. It introduces the two or three main pieces of evidence that the author will use to support the essay’s position. While not required in a thesis, organizational statements can make for stronger thesis statements.
An organizational statement can take the form of a separate sentence or can be attached to a thesis in a single sentence, as seen in the examples below. The organizational elements appear in bold text:
- Movies produced in the mid-1950s used obsessive behavior to depict teenage romance as something dangerous that should be avoided. Obsessive behavior was viewed as rebellious, uncontrollable, and harmful, both to the teenagers and to the people who loved them.
- Since obsessive behavior was viewed as rebellious, uncontrollable, and dangerous, movies produced in the mid-1950s used it to depict teenage romance as something that should be avoided for the sake of young adults and the people who loved them.
Notice how the second version, above, strengthens the original thesis by appearing as part of the same sentence.
Evidence in the body of an essay should be presented in the same order in which it appears in an organizational statement. In the example above, it means the paper would have to discuss rebelliousness, an uncontrollable nature, and danger (as they relate to obsessive teenage romance in film) in that order.
Built-In Practice: Finding The Supporting Points
In “How the New ‘Aladdin’ Stacks Up Against a Century of Hollywood Stereotyping”, find the two or three pieces of evidence that the author uses to support the essay’s position.
Write them here.
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