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A Clear Step in Two

By Julia McBride

Grade 10

First Place Winner

 

I already saw the news show,

The new coup two days ago,

Dead almost three centuries ago.

A country in throes and–

 

August

 

A gust of wind speaks my name,

Srccchhhh my pen rips through paper

Aims right through inky words.

The light flickers.

 

Hey, kid!

You’re just like me!

 

Like who?

Has the dark of the night

Finally consumed my mind?

Frightfully, I look up

 

Dust dances in front

Of the figure.

 

Trust,

I am not just in your mind.

I am here, though not alive

 

What do you want from me?

 

Can’t a guy

Walk around his regular old haunts?

 

I suppose.

 

But I do have an important

Message for you.

 

What kind of presage is this?

A warning from the other side?

Who do I know who died?

 

Now, now, don’t close your eyes.

If you’ll allow me to say

One thing more.

 

A soul, so marked with charcoal

There’s not much spark left

Bereft, pell-mell

In everything it does.

 

No escape.

A shape,

In the dusty distance,

Headed for you to tell

You to change.

 

What?

This is about me?

You’ve come to talk as a banshee,

To no degree you stop.

 

But I know who you are sir.

 

Inhale, a stare down.

 

I can’t fathom

How a phantom like you

Has no clue

What his self destructive tendencies

Tend to do.

And with that strong of an ego

Thinkin that you’re topshelf.

The best of the best.

 

A ghost like you in my room

Going boom!

With his knows and his prose.

No–

 

Kid! You should hear yourself

This is my warning to you,

Exactly what you speak of.

I may be an antique,

But you misspeak.

 

You’re tongue in cheek!

 

Really, me?

 

I paid for where my words landed me!

And there I am,

Branded with death,

Before I could take my first breath.

 

He nicked me out young,

And those among me.

It stung, kid.

Life wrung out in front of your face.

I clung to any scrap I could

While the storm raged.

 

This is going nowhere, sir.

 

Because you refuse my help

Just listen to me.

 

You speak incomprehensibly.

 

I am not just an entity

For you to rebuke.

 

 

But you’re dead!

Have been for the past

Two hundred seventeen years.

 

It’s a wonder isn’t it?

How times moves on

When you’re gone.

 

Sure, sir.

 

Per my last request in life,

I must confer with you.

 

I demur, sir!

 

But why,

You have everything to lose,

While I already have.

Take a cent of sense from me.

The one who didn’t learn

The right things when.

 

My lesson was too late,

Death heading for my ribcage.

 

But you,

You have your full life

In front of your face,

Why demur?

Spur on life,

Don’t just sit back

And watch the other’s backs

As they stir on revolution.

 

But they’re wrong!

 

Then be in the right.

 

Heavy breaths exhale,

I should just bail,

Failure too close

To show the world

The wrong.

 

Except then,

Where would you go?

 

The air’s stale,

Chair barren in the corner

No writing to spare any glares away.

You say prayers,

Yet you have total control over yourself.

 

What’s your goal?

 

 

To help.

That’s all.

 

Know-it-all.

 

You know little, kid.

Yes, I may have been

A little cocky when I was alive,

And well,

It doesn’t turn out well.

To claim knowledge over all.

 

I don’t, though.

 

Your mind,

It switches, confined,

From one idea

And opinion

To the next.

As fast as lightning.

You’re mind’s a storm, kid.

 

It’s time to settle it.

 

A sigh, slumped in a chair.

 

How?

 

Focus now,

And slow down.

 

You need a less

Dark direction,

Dig deep for a draft,

To settle this storm–

Clear this swarm.

 

But what if I’m scared?

 

That shows that you care,

Give yourself some credit, kid.

And don’t listen to the scum

Inside and out.

 

But it’ll take so much time,

To clear this doubt.

I feel like I’m in a drought,

This disastrous dust,

Just to dread the damage.

 

You’re thinking too fast,

Too far into the future,

That now is the past.

 

I don’t mean to,

 

It’s just second nature.

 

When I was in the legislature,

I did the same thing.

I wanted so bad to help

That I didn’t think who I hurt In my way.

 

Weigh the pros and cons,

You have a say in what

You say.

 

I think I need a minute, sir.

 

Take your time but,

Beware that there’s a limit.

 

I’m talking to a ghost!

 

I don’t mean to boast,

But you should make the most

Out of my time here with you.

I can’t stay.

 

Okay.

 

If I may,

 

Sure, what are you going to say?

 

One conversation can’t change a life.

The length of this strife

Will never end.

You still don’t have enough equipment

Equipped to expand and explore

Neverending until the afterlife.

 

So with my words to you then and soon,

Let that typhoon wash over you;

That bittersweet symphony

Resilient, resonant, rhythmic.

 

Is that it?

Are you going to end it like that?

 

I don’t want you to go, sir.

 

I have ample time left, kid.

Take my words in.

Let it sink in.

 

A quiet pause.

Amid the silence,

With jaws clenched,

Dust shimmering through

The transparent figure before

Me.

 

I rub my eyes.

Uptown is unusually quiet

For this time of night.

 

How long do I have to wait?

 

Don’t isolate yourself,

Orchestrate what comes to mind whenever.

Don’t wait until the wild white winter wind,

Blows away your final chances.

 

A clear path will be made

When you take that first step.

 

Take it from me kid,

For every step you take,

Two more will be set out for you.

Go through, even if it seems difficult.

 

What about my soul?

You said it was pell-mell,

As dark as charcoal, sir.

 

It has lightened since.

 

As a litterateur,

The symbolism here

Must be clear to you.

 

I suppose so.

 

How is it?

The being dead and all?

 

I’m certainly glad to see all

My friends that I missed.

Even the ones I wanted to maul.

 

Hah.

 

Though I do find myself

Missing the feel of

A quill in my deft

Fingers.

The smell of fresh ink

Turned into a work of words.

Crisp parchment begging

To be useful.

 

I have had so many ideas

In the years I led

Since that day I bled.

 

I look up at him.

 

You’re the first person

I admitted that to.

 

He takes a deep breath in.

I didn’t know ghosts had to breathe.

He stares back at me,

Before speaking once more.

 

Please remember my words,

They are all I have left.

 

Things still haunt me

From my past.

The things I wanted.

But dying shows a clearer picture.

Material things gain you little,

They’re not forever.

 

I don’t know what

 

I should take out of this.

 

Whatever you can.

 

I may talk a lot,

But listening is just as valuable.

 

Take that out of this.

 

I nod to his

Translucent form, relucent.

He’s still here.

 

If you will let me,

I’m not done yet.

 

Of course, sir.

 

My life was a blur,

I didn’t stop,

I concur.

But now,

I can’t find myself

To be angry.

 

Sure, I may have

Plowed through life,

Speaking vows saying thou

Like pow!

 

Thank you for

Giving me a chance

To speak my final truth.

 

 

 

To finally lay me weary soul

To rest with hope

To a new future.

 

To you.

 

The thanks are all mine, sir.

 

Dust dissipates,

Ghost no more.

 

I can’t say for sure If he’s moved on

Or if it was just

One too many a late night.

 

But now I find myself here.

Standing tall and proud.

 

His first and final words

Ringing through my ears

Like the liberty bell,

Crack and all.

 

I finally took a clear step, In two.

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Anoka County Library Write On! 2024 Short Story Contest Winners Copyright © 2024 by Gwen Udvig; Genevieve Rajkowski; Julia McBride; Richard Pina-raya; Rhett LeBeau; and Alyssa Carlson. All Rights Reserved.